DEAD KIDS IN WAR

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dadio
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DEAD KIDS IN WAR

Post by dadio » October 25th, 2011, 2:50 pm

He just happened upon them
In a field lying there in the tall
Grass on their backs, seemingly
Sleeping, but dead; two children
Of Finnish origins, maybe, at least
By where they’re found and area
Of ground. She lay as if trying to
Catch the sun’s attention, with one
Hand by her side, the other resting
On her thigh. The boy lay a little
Way away small fists clenched tight
As if frozen by death in pose to fight.
The soldier walked slowly around
Them beneath the hot sun, wiped his
Brow, reached inside his pocket for
A cigarette, fumbled for a lighter,
Stood over the girl six or seven,
She oblivious of her state of dress
Or how she lay. The soldier inhaled
Deep, the hot smoke hit his throat
Made him choke. Kids killed in cold
Blood in war; no joke. It was 1942
He remembers now, taking up the
Photograph of white and black,
Taken in midst of war and battle
Scarred and brain in fog, wearied
By march and sight and smell of death.
Whose kids they were he never knew,
Sleeping in death’s claim; two kids,
In a field without memory, without name.
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Re: DEAD KIDS IN WAR

Post by dadio » October 25th, 2011, 3:33 pm

Finnish children killed by Soviet partisans at Seitajärvi in Finnish Lapland 1942.

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Re: DEAD KIDS IN WAR

Post by creativesoul » October 25th, 2011, 4:18 pm

had a hard time with this one- good writing
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: DEAD KIDS IN WAR

Post by dadio » October 26th, 2011, 2:59 am

Thank you, creativesoul

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Re: DEAD KIDS IN WAR

Post by Arcadia » October 26th, 2011, 2:17 pm

a painful reminder (both your poem & the photo) that war is not joke (specially for the ones in the crossfire), gracias dadio

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Re: DEAD KIDS IN WAR

Post by dadio » October 26th, 2011, 4:57 pm

thank you, Arcadia

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Re: DEAD KIDS IN WAR

Post by mnaz » October 27th, 2011, 7:25 pm

heartbreaking.

and let's not forget the kids who fight the never-ending cycle of war either.

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Re: DEAD KIDS IN WAR

Post by dadio » October 28th, 2011, 1:36 am

Indeed, Mnaz. Good point. Thank you.

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