feathers in the freezer

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creativesoul
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feathers in the freezer

Post by creativesoul » October 26th, 2011, 2:28 pm

i knew
when i saw the bust
in portland
that man looked so sick
i picked him up hitchiking
a ways back
when the foster kids were still in my car
it was his face that let me see
that being with him
meant something was wrong with me
i knew that
he was set up
by my x and his get up
sad but true
nothing to misconstrue

those feathers in the freezer
his messed up face
let me know
i was right
felons make a different kind of deal
when they have nothing
they will find a way
to get what they want
even if they have to haunt
whatever past they had left
which is not
more or less
what they deserve
trying to save
men like that
is an old habit
that died
hawk medicine is for the warrior
the cook should go away
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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the mingo
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Re: feathers in the freezer

Post by the mingo » October 27th, 2011, 12:36 am

... even if they have to haunt
whatever past they had left ...
yeah 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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dadio
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Re: feathers in the freezer

Post by dadio » October 28th, 2011, 2:24 am

Darn good writing.

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Re: feathers in the freezer

Post by Kailashana » October 28th, 2011, 12:45 pm

Whoa! The title hooked me and the poem did not disappoint me. Excellent writing!

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Re: feathers in the freezer

Post by creativesoul » October 28th, 2011, 2:16 pm

merci-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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