WINTER MUSING.

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dadio
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WINTER MUSING.

Post by dadio » October 25th, 2011, 2:41 am

And the December weather
was upon you and the winter

evenings were drawing in and
she wanted to hold your hand

as you walked home after getting
off the school bus and the cold

air bit into flesh and you held her
hand and sensed the pulse in her

and the life there and the skin
on skin thing and some kind of

electrical buzz through your veins
and into your heart and head and

the traffic went by fast pushing up
wet from the road and you remember

the black tarmac then and her years
later by cruel cancer dragged dead.
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Re: WINTER MUSING.

Post by the mingo » October 25th, 2011, 12:26 pm

8) - ...
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: WINTER MUSING.

Post by dadio » October 25th, 2011, 1:20 pm

Thank you, the mingo :)

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Re: WINTER MUSING.

Post by creativesoul » October 28th, 2011, 2:21 pm

lovable- sweet- adoration- loved this
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: WINTER MUSING.

Post by dadio » October 29th, 2011, 1:39 am

Thank you, creativesoul

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