Safe from love

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hester_prynne

Safe from love

Post by hester_prynne » March 1st, 2005, 5:31 pm

Push back
hungry,
from vanity's
glass table.
Solitary stings.
Awareness,
shrugs a grin.

Hang all
laundry,
on an
apathetic line.
Safe from love.
Free,
to give it.
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mnaz
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Post by mnaz » March 1st, 2005, 5:55 pm

I won't find it. It will find me....


Nice one, Hes.....I enjoyed it.

Good to hear from you again!
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hester_prynne

Post by hester_prynne » March 1st, 2005, 6:00 pm

Hey Mnaz! Nice to uh "see" you.

so nice to read your recent post too....
wuz really good.
look forward to more.......

H 8)
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Post by mousey1 » March 1st, 2005, 11:45 pm

I liked Hes, very nice.
Awareness,
shrugs a grin
I understand this.
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by bennie » March 2nd, 2005, 2:24 pm

Hang all
laundry,
on an
apathetic line.
really like this line. i may "borrow" this idea of washing on an indifferent line :wink:

really nice poem, hest. "safe from love, free to give it." me too.
well I write music review so I do:
http://www.elevationstation.net
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