~ Old flame ~

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Vincy
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~ Old flame ~

Post by Vincy » November 15th, 2011, 3:56 pm

Ignition
at first asking
a flickering sparkle
catching straw
and before you know
flames galore
and what's more
a fuming show
burnt out in time
like most flares go.
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constantine
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Re: ~ Old flame ~

Post by constantine » November 15th, 2011, 8:50 pm

enjoyed the economy - the title gives the reader a nudge towards a metaphorical direction.

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dadio
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Re: ~ Old flame ~

Post by dadio » November 16th, 2011, 2:49 am

Good poem & theme.

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