I love you

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Kailashana
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I love you

Post by Kailashana » November 23rd, 2011, 5:21 pm

After all these years
the long road ahead
is shorter than the
vision I leave behind

I'm driving slower these days
walking to places
I have yet to go
with unwritten poems

the sky above me shaking
the ground below me
like dust
I gather myself
once more

to see the sunrise I can never
write into a poem

to feel the warmth of your love
I can never put into words.

saw
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Re: I love you

Post by saw » November 23rd, 2011, 8:14 pm

there is a beautiful sadness to this, yet the speaker seems to be in a healthy meditative state of mind......fine work
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: I love you

Post by dadio » November 24th, 2011, 4:28 am

Love the poem & theme.

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