Better Slice and Die (spenserian verse)

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ADannon
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Better Slice and Die (spenserian verse)

Post by ADannon » March 3rd, 2005, 9:53 am

With gentle hands I smoothed the veil of years,
A dream more pure than truth could ever be.
I would release this cup of constant tears,
With clarity see life flow over me.

Upon the shore of thought, an endless sea
Before me spanning all that time has wrought.
Past hope and aspiration wheeling free
In spite of all the lessons life has taught.

This futile battle ever long I’ve fought,
To fall upon a blade that love would hone,
With beauty’s’ tender mercy forged and bought.
I would that it slice clean and sever bone.

In salted wounds I spew the bitter grape,
And contemplate a souls’ repeated rape.

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Post by Arcadia » March 3rd, 2005, 10:03 am

beautiful!

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Post by ADannon » March 3rd, 2005, 4:54 pm

Thank you for reading Arcadia.......I appreciate your post~ *s*

hester_prynne

Post by hester_prynne » March 4th, 2005, 1:06 am

The last two lines: stopped me in my tracks.
An entirely beautiful piece.
Thank you for posting it.....
H 8)

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Post by ADannon » March 5th, 2005, 8:44 am

H~
Thank you for reading and for your very generous post.........I appreciate it. Glad you liked it~ *s*

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