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the mingo
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postcard

Post by the mingo » December 6th, 2011, 1:54 pm

the ego dies a death like
a gutshot deer
its blood soaks back
into the soil
pieces of its deteriorating fur taken by the wind
scattered everywhere
but other times it's like a mountain
slowly wearing away
changing shape as it does so
it becomes a landmark
it becomes a postcard
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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dadio
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Post by dadio » December 7th, 2011, 4:18 pm

Fine capture. 8)

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mnaz
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Re: postcard

Post by mnaz » December 12th, 2011, 9:30 pm

nothing like a mountain to put ego in its place ... how it dwarfs our span, and how in turn, time dwarfs the mountain. when those rock-tappers talk about "ancestral mountains," well, consider my mind properly blown ...

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