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Post by the mingo » December 16th, 2011, 3:48 am

it's not good
to die before
you've told
your story

... not good to put too much stock in anything
before breakfast .. before your great dead grandmother shows up
and begins talking to you just as your toast pops
- oh, you think she has left?
Nobody leaves ... you knew that, right?

not while the wind
is still blowing around

the Pharohs are still with us
King Solomon too

and flying horse gas stations
where your windows get cleaned
and your oil is checked

this poem has '59 cadillac fins
hello june cleaver - all those legs of yours
all across the front seat
o right to the moon

myself, I'd like to see another ice age come 'round
nothing like a whambam ice age to liven things up

the last one was good for the graphic arts especially
go global cooling
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: especially

Post by dadio » December 16th, 2011, 4:38 am

8)

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Re: especially

Post by judih » December 16th, 2011, 12:24 pm

global
cool and global hot
eclipse the night sky
roaring your damndest
straight through bourbon clouds
arrow sharp
(oh troubles and toils - mean nothin)
broken radiator boil
myths of stars and sunshine
toasted icy tundra tune
northern lights to heal the path
snowshoes to go
night air to whistle

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Re: especially

Post by Arcadia » December 16th, 2011, 12:54 pm

:)

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Re: especially

Post by SadLuckDame » December 16th, 2011, 1:29 pm

Thank you, mingo.
I got a lot from this.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Re: especially

Post by the mingo » December 16th, 2011, 2:51 pm

You folks is 20 times great - ya'll knew that, right? 8) 8) 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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