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Post by sonofthesun » December 14th, 2011, 5:27 am

When i found
where im from
i let go of
the truth
id been told
my mind became
my own
and the universe
opened for me
there were no
lottery tickets
you can only own
what youre
willing to accept
its kindergarten
and a willingness
to realize
its not all about you
its you
and everything else
then it begins
There is no empty space

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Re: found

Post by zero_hero » December 14th, 2011, 12:17 pm

thoughtful
Free Rice

"the lesson is... if you want it? keep a copy of it." Doreen Peri

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Re: found

Post by dadio » December 15th, 2011, 4:24 am

Good capture & theme.

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Re: found

Post by creativesoul » December 18th, 2011, 11:26 am

nice spot... yeah... like hearing that you are finding that freedom that no one can take away-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: found

Post by sonofthesun » January 4th, 2012, 5:19 am

i pretend...
There is no empty space

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Re: found

Post by creativesoul » January 4th, 2012, 1:51 pm

found is beautiful- but the best part of found is after lost- it would seem that if i never got lost i could never be found- the balance --
if there is such a thing-
my life had some rocks fall from the sky
the brillance of the star falling captivates
the seemingly clever choices
dreams where my mouth was full of grass
i became a wolf
bite in my sleep
i never knew
really
anything
but humility will and does prevail
that seems to be
icing on the cake
i did do what i was supposed to-
that is as found as i can get
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: found

Post by Kailashana » January 5th, 2012, 5:07 am

Long sigh.

~A

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Re: found

Post by sonofthesun » January 7th, 2012, 3:01 am

its make believe and happenstance
its pure love and letting it be
its what you know
and knowing others dont
and being happy with it
why complicate
the simpleness
we are created from
its all one thing
There is no empty space

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Re: found

Post by creativesoul » February 8th, 2012, 2:11 am

long sigh
perhaps it is more fun to 'get lost' if you know that you will be found-
if only by yourself
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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