the moon is a yellow rose dying

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Kailashana
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the moon is a yellow rose dying

Post by Kailashana » December 21st, 2011, 5:42 am

If you asked me how to write a poem,
I'd tell you to go to hell,
and after you do
a few thousand lifetimes later,
let yourself be turned over
like dirt,
like the stink of heaven.

But if you wanted the truth,
I'd tell you nothing
you didn't already know,
dear poet.

Poems will read your fingers.

~A

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the mingo
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Re: the moon is a yellow rose dying

Post by the mingo » December 21st, 2011, 11:02 am

i had a poem read my fingers once. I said "What do they say what do they say?"
and the poem answered, "o you're such a cocked-up gutterminded dirty little boy!"
And I went, "O Baby baby - hell yeah Mongolia! 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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mnaz
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Re: the moon is a yellow rose dying

Post by mnaz » December 21st, 2011, 2:24 pm

read my fingers, yes... they do that ...

(your title reminded me of that twisted "bedtime story" by tom waits . . . "the moon was a piece of rotten wood" ... sorry...)

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dadio
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Re: the moon is a yellow rose dying

Post by dadio » December 21st, 2011, 4:08 pm

yes, good write.

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