in that ivory tower
that poses as my mind
Professor Reason
smacked his spiked pointer
on my calloused head
a river of self contained
sweetness ran
in streams of awareness
from my ice cold eyes
hesitating on my cheeks
like an unwelcome guest
for a pity-fuck photo-op,
then dripped down
like lost minor chords,
splat, splat, splat, splat
on a worn out pair of shoes
calling on an old friend
calling on an old friend
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: calling on an old friend
I wish I was a Lutheran sometimes.
Nice poem, thank you.
Nice poem, thank you.
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Re: calling on an old friend
Interesting poem but that word interesting doesn't get at the emotion conveyed. The cause of the emotion is still a mystery to me as a reader though the description of the emotion comes thru.
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