shoot the moon

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saw
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shoot the moon

Post by saw » February 7th, 2012, 10:26 am

if it smells like nirvana.....
oh oh, I hear the pathos
of little feet, do I dare
make the inexorable sojourn

they tell me couch potatoes are losers
their eyes fall out watching the box
stuffing too many taco grande supremes
down their listless throats

e-bay's a temporary tonic
for the crestfallen, methadone
for laziness, why go outside anymore
I got my pizza, my mixed nuts

my objet d'art jumbo screen
I paid the utility company, I hide
from my stupid neighbors, whatchamacallit
next door, doofus down the street

I got my savoy truffle in the drawer
my salt and vinegar pringles, this is
an age of miracles, who needs a bunker
my apartment is safe enough, I got my

K Mart photos placed in strategic places
always in view, where i sit, where I walk
I've got a life, it ain't rococo, it's even better
a little slice of rocky road

dreams can come true
my boss at the 7-11 told me just last night
I have the right stuff
to be a damn good manager one day
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: shoot the moon

Post by dadio » February 7th, 2012, 10:55 am

couldn't have put it better myself. Excellente! 8)

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the mingo
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Re: shoot the moon

Post by the mingo » February 7th, 2012, 10:58 am

as I heard Perry Mason once say with a raised eyebrow, "Well, is it the truth?"
Ha - thx saw. 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

Kailashana
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Re: shoot the moon

Post by Kailashana » February 7th, 2012, 2:52 pm

o stfu!

;-)

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mnaz
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Re: shoot the moon

Post by mnaz » February 7th, 2012, 3:06 pm

haha
the secret of happiness is low expectations? ...

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revolutionrabbit
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Re: shoot the moon

Post by revolutionrabbit » February 7th, 2012, 11:53 pm

7 11 is kinda like the existential vacuum on smoothies.

(oh, i mean slushies, or whatever the call em now)

saw
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Re: shoot the moon

Post by saw » February 8th, 2012, 10:19 am

thanx colleagues......loved your comments !
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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