kauai-1985-2012

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creativesoul
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kauai-1985-2012

Post by creativesoul » February 11th, 2012, 1:50 am

i came here
when my sons were 5 and 7
i thought it was paradise

the sweetness of the small town of Hanalei
lured us to become happy people
surf, food, friendship
love
island lfe
is like family
a fish bowl
some blow many bubbles

the island teaches you
how to live
in another way
the problems are more community bades
no one likes cops here
cept thier wives

weed is a economical equation
touristas and honey moon lovers
want to smoke weed

we got that covered
some us do weddings
designer love potions and butterflies
my friends with boob jobs wanna be prttier in old age
beach bunny damage
rock star wrinkles
jurasic park was a movie
the pilsbury dough boy drives u a road that says 'local residents only'
and backs into a phone pole
long time ago that would not have happened
not like that
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: kauai-1985-2012

Post by dadio » April 28th, 2012, 4:39 am

Fine poem & theme.

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Re: kauai-1985-2012

Post by the mingo » April 28th, 2012, 11:26 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: kauai-1985-2012

Post by creativesoul » April 28th, 2012, 1:04 pm

well- it is fun watching them kiss, and then well- it is all a beautiful journey- just dont always feel that way- ya know?
:oops: :D :shock: :roll: :mrgreen: :| 8)
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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