the bath

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the mingo
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the bath

Post by the mingo » March 16th, 2012, 1:55 pm

of course it's not poetry!
not constipated either!
good easy bowel movement,
goodgood !!

being wildly experimentative
i earthquaked a japanese woman

O japanese woman !

i strawcaked the berry cheese!
for thank thank & you please
sighting along the seismic plane!

it was too much
and I wanted to be in it
and watch at the same time
an attribute of God, of course,
which I wanted to steal

O honey-muffined japanese woman,
you know what I mean
i'll let you run the furnace
for a little bit anyway
& you can bathe me now
!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: the bath

Post by judih » March 17th, 2012, 12:52 am

visuals provided
(self-assemblage,thank you)

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Re: the bath

Post by Kailashana » March 17th, 2012, 11:46 am

but....is it song?

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Re: the bath

Post by stilltrucking » March 18th, 2012, 8:04 pm

good shit :wink: 8)

for all I know it could be poetry
wonderful poem mingo thanks for writing

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Re: the bath

Post by the mingo » March 19th, 2012, 12:44 am

Thx, folks. busy here down to work, rackin' up some overtime and just about flat out on my face otherwise.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: the bath

Post by dadio » March 19th, 2012, 4:21 am

Love this 8)

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