SOME DAYS AFTER SCHOOL.

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dadio
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SOME DAYS AFTER SCHOOL.

Post by dadio » March 22nd, 2012, 3:15 am

Some days after school
having slipped by her mother’s vision

she met you in the back woods
by the pool

and you were there
in the your tee shirt and jeans

and she stood there
for a moment

in her blouse and skirt
and you stared at each other

taking in the beauty
you saw there

enjoying the moment
the big now

shutting out the bird song
the rabbits by the trees

the far off sound of traffic
and she broke out and said

had a job get by her scanner eyes
had to slip out

before she gave out the chores
and she came over to you

standing there
and stood real close

so that you could sense her body
just about touching yours

her perfume teasing
your nostrils

stirring your body
and then she closed her eyes

and kissed your lips
and it was like

a first day of creation
as if God had said

there you go
feel the love

sense the glow
and you did

and it seemed an eternity
but was merely minutes

glued and touched
and wet and warm

then you sensed
the rain coming

and distant storm
and then the raindrops

hit the pool like small bullets
and grabbing her hand

you ran through the trees
away from the pool

carrying the memory of a kiss
and a bird’s lone call.
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Re: SOME DAYS AFTER SCHOOL.

Post by judih » March 23rd, 2012, 12:26 am

lovely

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Re: SOME DAYS AFTER SCHOOL.

Post by dadio » March 23rd, 2012, 2:15 am

Thank you, Judih.

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Re: SOME DAYS AFTER SCHOOL.

Post by theirishsea » March 23rd, 2012, 2:20 pm

Nice.
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Re: SOME DAYS AFTER SCHOOL.

Post by dadio » March 23rd, 2012, 3:05 pm

Thank you, theirishsea.

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