a lot on the mind

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the mingo
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a lot on the mind

Post by the mingo » April 4th, 2012, 12:09 pm

the demon princes of the east have spoken for Syria
and the blood flows
war deals
peace deals
i can't tell the difference these days

ya take a dog for a walk
and the animal will leave shit behind him
better that than to have it
piling up in your house

can you hear me, America?

the sun don't mean nothing
to people with
a lot on their minds
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: a lot on the mind

Post by dadio » April 4th, 2012, 4:06 pm

8) :cry:

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Re: a lot on the mind

Post by stilltrucking » April 4th, 2012, 6:33 pm

the absent minded american

8) :(
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Re: a lot on the mind

Post by judih » April 4th, 2012, 11:41 pm

a lot to hold within
better to let it out
sun and then home

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Re: a lot on the mind

Post by stilltrucking » April 5th, 2012, 7:09 pm

a lot to hold within
better to let it out
sun and then home
is that a haiku?
it beats me
it struck home for me
thank you for writing it

thanks for inspiring it mingo

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