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creativesoul
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stand up

Post by creativesoul » April 20th, 2012, 3:25 am

duh
i hadda stand up for what i believed
even at the risk of falling down

when i fell i hadda ask fer help see

then one day


i was standing up on a paddle board in the sea
just mind fucking blown at how good this is
my friends fly on boards in the wind

hadda leave behind the duh crowd'

joined up with the water people
surfers and fisherman
hikers and swimmers

the duh crowd is still wondering 'what happened'
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: stand up

Post by stilltrucking » April 20th, 2012, 4:49 am

I admire your courage
thank you for writing

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dadio
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Re: stand up

Post by dadio » April 23rd, 2012, 2:34 am

Good down to earth poetry 8)

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Re: stand up

Post by creativesoul » April 23rd, 2012, 4:45 am

thanx- 8)
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: stand up

Post by the mingo » April 23rd, 2012, 11:40 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: stand up

Post by creativesoul » April 23rd, 2012, 11:34 pm

stand up comedy- 'babe..i took viagra for you'



does that mean something?
no can stand up?
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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