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- constantine
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hollywood and vine
it happened again -
it always does, this time
it was a woman in a car, turning
a corner, a three second window
of opportunity, into which
i crammed a neurotic lifetime
she sort of reminded me...
different combinations came to mind
louise ranier with a touch of anna magnani
or maybe a susan hayward/myrna loy hybrid
she was tough to pin down -
hard to figure out, of course
i only saw her from the shoulders up
but that seemed to be enough, after all
i've gone with much less and ended up
at the same place - the same damn place
it always does, this time
it was a woman in a car, turning
a corner, a three second window
of opportunity, into which
i crammed a neurotic lifetime
she sort of reminded me...
different combinations came to mind
louise ranier with a touch of anna magnani
or maybe a susan hayward/myrna loy hybrid
she was tough to pin down -
hard to figure out, of course
i only saw her from the shoulders up
but that seemed to be enough, after all
i've gone with much less and ended up
at the same place - the same damn place
- judih
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Re: hollywood and vine
a fine zoom into id-ing
with you, with the situ
yes
with you, with the situ
yes
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Re: hollywood and vine
my grandpas star 'richard dix' is there- in the cemment- as all the memories of junkies and hookers my father and uncle knew- but really- i liked the small little moment of observation with you- i think of the shoes walking on my grandfather s achievement-...........i think of the dreams i had once- like jack nicolson in my rear view mirror in santa monica\ or peter fonda with his new baby in venice-- and before my friend aurthur- died of wet brain.. he played me a song on his piano---i havent gotten anyone hawaiian to sing bali hai yet.....aloha-nice write-inspiring-if i might add...
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: hollywood and vine
o those moments! Thx Dino
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
- constantine
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Re: hollywood and vine
thanks for the nice, and interesting, comments. it's my first poem since returning back home to baltimore. it's strange; sometimes i wonder if i'll ever write another - i get nervous - but something always triggers it off. it's only a matter of time.
Re: hollywood and vine
great stuff dino.....baltimore will fuck with your head some days....ha
I like the subtlety you employ to deliver the goods
I like the subtlety you employ to deliver the goods
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
Re: hollywood and vine
cool.
you made it back !
you made it back !
- constantine
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Re: hollywood and vine
thanks mnaz, it's good to be back
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