LOURDES 2006.

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dadio
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LOURDES 2006.

Post by dadio » April 28th, 2012, 4:15 am

Jimmy opened his suitcase in the room
at Lourdes and said Oh no there’s molasses
all over the clothes and shoes and I’ve got

a whole week here and he sat down in a chair
his head in his hands saying What have I done?
What am I going to do for clothes now? you

went over and looked in and sure enough
the molasses were over his clothes and shoes.
What am I going to do? he said and you said

Leave it to me Jim I'll sort it and you went through
the clothes taking out the items untouched
by the molasses and set them aside on the bed

and then carried the suitcase of black sticky items
Into the washroom and there one by one you carefully
washed them through with soap and water until

they were clean and smelt of soap and fresh air
and all the while 94 year old Jim sat in a chair
watching with his eyes watery and jaw hung loose

seeing the black water run down the wide plughole
and once it was done you wrung the clothes out
like your mother used to do when you were a kid

and hung them out on the balcony on the small
clothesline and placed the washed out black shoes
by the outside wall to dry out in the hot afternoon

sun and Jimmy came over and stood on the balcony
with one hand on the rail and the other on his stick
looking over at the Pyrenees in the distance and he

said That was real good of you. I owe you big time
and you stood next to him feeling the hot afternoon
sun on your face and arms and felt good and you

said You owe me nothing Jim I just did what some
good guy would and his watery eyes swept over you
matching the French sky’s watery afternoon blue.
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Re: LOURDES 2006.

Post by the mingo » April 28th, 2012, 11:31 am

8) couldn't decide on one sunglassed expression or three but I have more fear of overdoing things versus underdoing them so I went with the one. Just imagine one pair of triple dark sunglasses on this guy and you've got it.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: LOURDES 2006.

Post by dadio » April 28th, 2012, 1:55 pm

:D Old Jim was a classic guy. He passed away in 2007 aged 95. Thank you mingo

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