Feast or Phantom

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WIREMAN
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Feast or Phantom

Post by WIREMAN » September 3rd, 2004, 5:03 pm

some mysteries will
never die
shadows clutter this
empty place
thoughts linger like
a silent bubble
ready to burst....wet
saturation point
always emerges
trembling lips often
rediscover
find your feast at fhe
phantom dwelling place......WIREMAN
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hester_prynne

Hey Wired....

Post by hester_prynne » September 4th, 2004, 5:30 pm

I really like this...
a delicious feast of catharsis...
nice one,
H
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Re: Feast or Phantom

Post by dadio » April 30th, 2012, 2:34 pm

I like the poem & theme.
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Re: Feast or Phantom

Post by the mingo » May 1st, 2012, 11:53 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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