Down The Road

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theirishsea
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Down The Road

Post by theirishsea » May 3rd, 2012, 8:08 am

down the road
the wind begging
for release

you can see it
struggling to get free
from the trees

you can feel it pawing
your face
searching
for compassion

your seashell of an ear
can feel it whip through
your soul

soul?
the wind
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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Re: Down The Road

Post by creativesoul » May 3rd, 2012, 6:27 pm

interesting, that feeling of restlessness in the soul like wind- never can hold it down, it is so vaporous- like the mystery of fire and love- :!:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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stilltrucking
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Re: Down The Road

Post by stilltrucking » May 3rd, 2012, 7:26 pm

a million mile poem :D 8)
thank for writing.

A restless soul in the wind. a live forever feeling in the wind.


When I was living on the road and I was passing through some town where I had a few friends, it was hard to get back into the truck after a few days off. This was a million mile song for me. It got me out of town and on the road again. Sorry this is only a coincidence of titles but your poem brought the song to mind.

Down the road when life was in the wind

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Re: Down The Road

Post by creativesoul » May 4th, 2012, 8:16 pm

WELL I AM KINDA AN INDIAN AND WELL THE COWBOYS AND I- UHG WELL- ANYWAYS- song is nice... [lying] i hate that kind of music= i love it that you share what it did for you and your personal glimmer of sight into this often wild and crazy world- truckers were kind of ... well- a hippie =indian girl s like me- friend.... aloha :mrgreen:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Arcadia
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Re: Down The Road

Post by Arcadia » May 5th, 2012, 8:58 am

wow!, amazing poem, theirishsea!! :D

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