after a nap an image grew

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after a nap an image grew

Post by mtmynd » March 8th, 2005, 6:47 pm

against a pure white wall
void of decoration
Marietta sighed
leaving an orange stain
that broke the silence
peacefully

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Post by mtmynd » March 8th, 2005, 6:52 pm

(so it seemed within the orange peace)

books were lined up
like dead soldiers
their spines riddled with
the alphabet
taking their stories to
the used book grave

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Post by WIREMAN » March 8th, 2005, 8:45 pm

365 post 2X cecil
oranges have been
my craving of late
also wondering bout
the 2nd half....LOL..........

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Post by mtmynd » March 8th, 2005, 11:45 pm

thx, wired
them were the first words
of any poetic merit that i've
written in quite some time
and i enjoyed the hell out of it.

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Post by judih » March 9th, 2005, 12:08 am

marietta pinned herself between ch- and ed
and verbed herself into other worlds
breathlessly, i watched her sail

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Post by WIREMAN » March 9th, 2005, 12:08 am

Hey cecil........it's funny how it comes and goes.....sometimes it's like pulling teeth and other times it spreads like butter, sometimes it's the painting that flows or with me the wire or welding projects, it is really hard to do all of em at once, plus keep a relationship going. I can remember 3 years ago when I had my WIREMAN Gallery I would make 3 wired ones in a day and write, then go out and perform damn near every night. I wonder if it's even possible to keep all these balls juggling in the air and it is hard, especially when ya add in the job, which is forever expanding and very demanding of my energies at 52. It's a beautiful demon, my passion for art and I find myself becoming more and more dedicated to the path as I grow older and see the sands shrinking in the hourglass. Yet I have no choice, it's a thirst and hunger that swallows up lives.

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Post by judih » March 9th, 2005, 12:10 am

hey wireman - checkout our posting times
(now stop your rattlin and get those poetry words to do the work)

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Post by WIREMAN » March 9th, 2005, 12:13 am

I noticed to j...it's kinda scary night, read what happened with piph and me regarding my Construct-a-Poem......on AC open mike..........I'll put it here too............

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Post by mousey1 » March 12th, 2005, 12:07 pm

Beautiful write mtmynd, I enjoyed, and your enjoyment showed. :)
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by mtmynd » March 12th, 2005, 1:57 pm

durn decent of ya', mousey, to say so... :wink: i appreciate it!

TYVM,

cecil

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Post by hester_prynne » March 12th, 2005, 3:34 pm

used book grave yard.
one of my favorite places to haunt....

love this one Cec
H 8)

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Post by mtmynd » March 13th, 2005, 9:33 pm

almosst missed this, Hes'.... and so glad I didn't! Thank ya kindly.

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