message to the ones i loved
i miss the place we created for a time
that those places were sometimes left behind
motionless and watching the final steps
made it this far even if i wept
there were times i was unkind
the reasons seemed ok at the time
heard those stories of forgiveness and faith
not so sure i can be secure
when what i thought then
is such a blurr
the times i helped you kick
i did what i could
made me sick
before you died you were such a dick
now believe me
i cannot take anymore
that is why i walk out the door
why they all scream 'whore'
maybe i didnt love you right
but had to leave or stay and fight
i never did cheat
but i wanted out
it can work i said
never be dishonest with yourself
because any of the things that you thought you could hide
will come right back up at high tide
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creativesoul
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Don't believe I've ever read a work by you that rhymed. It works. 
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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creativesoul
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funny yes? my first poem - in college at 40- i flipped out- it was a creative writing class, and she has me writing a poem- i was miffed- and yet - it turned out later- to be- the very thing that saved me many times- like a secret tool= of vague images = that help blaze the trail- sunday morning coffeeee-scuzi not really awake yet----
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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