... with writing

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the mingo
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... with writing

Post by the mingo » July 21st, 2012, 10:12 am

the dog is howling like a coyote
and the shocked monkey is reaching up
to take the stars for a licking
the tent needs to be taken down
the carnival has other dates to fill
the elephants are crushing the loose lions
and there is slack in the ropes
Baby remember i went looking for you
just to hold your hand
and we climbed a big pile
of sand as spinniing coins
filled the air & the thin paper
was filled with writing
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: ... with writing

Post by stilltrucking » July 21st, 2012, 12:19 pm

As if I had Dadio's Picasso vision
I try to imagine as I read your poem

this is one cool bandit poem

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Re: ... with writing

Post by dadio » July 22nd, 2012, 3:39 am

Love this poem, the mingo.

i went looking for you
just to hold your hand
and we climbed a big pile
of sand as spinniing coins
filled the air & the thin paper
was filled with writing...

8)

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Re: ... with writing

Post by the mingo » July 22nd, 2012, 11:59 am

Thx, boys ... 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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