The Brown Bottle Blues

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Shem
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The Brown Bottle Blues

Post by Shem » September 23rd, 2012, 8:46 pm

Rhythmically inspired by John lee hooker’s House Rent Boogie


Get off work, Head to the store
Buy just one brown bottle cause I’m hitting the trails tomorrow.
Get home; rip the cap off that sucker
And drain it to the dregs.
Now what?
I want another.
I’m not going to the bar cause I’m a reclusive ass motherfucker
But I will drive to the store
Get there and my favorite six pack’s on sale
Better only have a couple cause I’m hitting those trails tomorrow
Get home; throw them all back and somehow its 1:30 A.M.
Better get to bed.
Wake up and my heads swimming and my stomachs sick
Got those old brown bottle blues again.
Pull the blankets up over my head
And sleep in till 11:30
Better get up if I’m going.
So I get some coffee and head up to the mountains
Time for a nice hike, my favorite thing.
Start out but soon I’m sweating and huffing and gasping for breath
Damn that bottle!
This is no good, I’ve had enough of
Those damn brown bottle blues
It’s time to
Stop.
Leave the letter that never begins to go find the latter that ever comes to end, written in smoke and blurred by mist and signed of solitude, sealed of night.
-James Joyce

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Re: The Brown Bottle Blues

Post by tarbaby » September 23rd, 2012, 9:13 pm

“Where is that man who has forgotten words that I may have a word with him?”

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Re: The Brown Bottle Blues

Post by dadio » December 14th, 2012, 3:33 am

Oh yeah, love it. 8)

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Re: The Brown Bottle Blues

Post by Cenacle » December 14th, 2012, 9:20 am

Nice one, Dadio. Them blues is demons, fo' sho'...

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Re: The Brown Bottle Blues

Post by Shem » December 22nd, 2012, 7:08 am

the demon I am fighting, if only it was not such a tempting battlefeild....
Leave the letter that never begins to go find the latter that ever comes to end, written in smoke and blurred by mist and signed of solitude, sealed of night.
-James Joyce

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