You never expected
your mother to die
although the hospital
hinted at such
all lost
in their
language trap
all in all
it was a double blow
as dementia took her
piece by piece
years ago
then the final punch
the knock out blow
remembering
someone saying
that’s how
some loved ones
tend to go
and the relationship
between mother and child
is never simple
travelling as it does
through high hills
and valleys sometimes
dark and often deep
and remembering
all that
the need to weep
you reflect on all that
the final sight
of your mother
in that bed
the closed eyes
the small smile
remain in your head
and you know
after all such
you loved her overmuch
and always will
indeed
you love her still.
LOVE HER STILL
LOVE HER STILL
Last edited by dadio on October 10th, 2012, 6:49 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: LOVE HER STILL
Must be a typo here:
all lost
in the their
language trap
all in all
Another touching poem.
all lost
in the their
language trap
all in all
Another touching poem.
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Re: LOVE HER STILL
This was heart-felt.
Thank you, Dadio.
Thank you, Dadio.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll
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Re: LOVE HER STILL
i watched as she faded into another world- my granny- nice write
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: LOVE HER STILL
Thank you, theirishsea, SadLuckDame & creativesoul. I have edited the typo.
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