LOVE HER STILL

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dadio
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LOVE HER STILL

Post by dadio » October 4th, 2012, 2:54 pm

You never expected
your mother to die
although the hospital
hinted at such

all lost
in their
language trap
all in all

it was a double blow
as dementia took her
piece by piece
years ago

then the final punch
the knock out blow
remembering
someone saying

that’s how
some loved ones
tend to go
and the relationship

between mother and child
is never simple
travelling as it does
through high hills

and valleys sometimes
dark and often deep
and remembering
all that

the need to weep
you reflect on all that
the final sight
of your mother

in that bed
the closed eyes
the small smile
remain in your head

and you know
after all such
you loved her overmuch
and always will

indeed
you love her still.
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theirishsea
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Re: LOVE HER STILL

Post by theirishsea » October 9th, 2012, 8:01 am

Must be a typo here:

all lost
in the their
language trap
all in all


Another touching poem.
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SadLuckDame
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Re: LOVE HER STILL

Post by SadLuckDame » October 9th, 2012, 5:03 pm

This was heart-felt.
Thank you, Dadio.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Re: LOVE HER STILL

Post by creativesoul » October 10th, 2012, 2:57 am

i watched as she faded into another world- my granny- nice write
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: LOVE HER STILL

Post by dadio » October 10th, 2012, 6:51 am

Thank you, theirishsea, SadLuckDame & creativesoul. I have edited the typo.

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