like steps untaken

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sweetwater
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like steps untaken

Post by sweetwater » November 16th, 2012, 5:59 pm

like steps untaken
paths un-explored
all the lives we cannot experience
all the things we accidentally ignore
so many undreamed islands
unthought of places

so many smiles and sweet faces
to remind us and then to forget

all the places we have never been
all the places we have met

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Re: like steps untaken

Post by sweetwater » November 16th, 2012, 6:01 pm

like steps wandering
> into the resounding void
> of so many undreamed
> desert tales
> words stumble into
> something lost
> to re-invent
> touch
> like sounds
> scrawled by light
>
> and memory echoes
> for a fraction
> of a second
> between a million sunsets
> and the wings
> we didn't grow
>
> this shuddering
> inside your skin
> these wild lightfloods
> rose-coloured
> to dip your heart inside
> and taste its sweetness
>
> this seething dewdrops
> and raging of eons
>
> i drink them
> in your translucent presence
> in your dark tactile absence
>
> while i see you tumbling
> in feline grace
> through the hiccups
> of freedom
>
> a glowing star berry
> bartering rock
> for sap
>
> breathing
> this desire to burn
>
> you
> night reveller
> soaked with
> wild sunsets
>
> hungry
> your soul
> wild open
>

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Re: like steps untaken

Post by sweetwater » November 16th, 2012, 6:04 pm

the poem itself about leaves and dew drops
and things that fall to the ground
to meet the delight of its offering

as a kiss is sweet as soft rain
as in the smile of your face to change
more yearning than on earth i have ever felt

merging with the greater being of love
within ourselves

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Re: like steps untaken

Post by justwalt » November 16th, 2012, 8:43 pm

The first part has me worried... the rest is off the
scale...
Killer
many is a word

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