the best sol latte that you ever had

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sweetwater
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the best sol latte that you ever had

Post by sweetwater » November 21st, 2012, 9:15 pm

i want to know where i am going
and i want to feel that i don't know where i am

i want to have the best sensation
of knowing you are with me

to lead to you places that you feel
where you are but don't care where you land

to lose the sense of fear
for being what i am

and what you are
and all you lose along the way

to accept it as to say
that things will be ok

that there's nothing left to say

that you don't have to pay to play
that you the greatest that you have even been

for all the things you have seen

all the time that wasted you
time it took to get it through

all that pain to celebrate
all that sorrow to contemplate

as the best sol latte that you ever had

tell me
aren't you glad

that you didn't waste your time
that you waited to see the line

waited to see yourself again

and did you find yourself
looking for 'one'

the 'one' to say it all came true
your dreams and love and you

all the things you are
all those starlit stars

and everything you can't become
became the reason that you have won

yourself again

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SadLuckDame
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Re: the best sol latte that you ever had

Post by SadLuckDame » November 22nd, 2012, 12:44 am

I love this!
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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dadio
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Re: the best sol latte that you ever had

Post by dadio » November 22nd, 2012, 8:38 am

This poem has much to recommend it. The simple layout, the words conveying the theme without losing the essence. Enjoyed. 8)

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Re: the best sol latte that you ever had

Post by sweetwater » November 22nd, 2012, 4:15 pm

bad rock ballad song ... with too many references to idle worship

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