NO MORE ECHOES

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dadio
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NO MORE ECHOES

Post by dadio » November 29th, 2012, 3:55 pm

Two mental breakdowns
In as many years;
The ECT, she
Knows too well; the dark

Corridors; the sharp
Broken mirrors, all
Reflecting different
Selves; the slashed wrist;

Bath-almost-drowning
Business; the white
Coated nurse and docs
And the tricks up their

Long thin sleeves; and the
Emptiness inside
With the long slow fall
Into that so long

Awaited and wished for
Oblivion and
No more echoes from
The sad ghostly dead.

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Re: NO MORE ECHOES

Post by stilltrucking » November 29th, 2012, 4:15 pm

a good capture I think
:(
"Is there no way out of the mind? "Sylvia Somebody

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Re: NO MORE ECHOES

Post by dadio » November 30th, 2012, 3:04 am

Thank you, stilltrucking.

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Re: NO MORE ECHOES

Post by Atehequa » December 1st, 2012, 8:01 am

Quite enjoyable and always interesting, dadio.

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Re: NO MORE ECHOES

Post by dadio » December 1st, 2012, 8:56 am

Thank you, Atehequa.

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