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david
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personal effects

Post by david » February 13th, 2013, 10:50 am

I found them
in the tortoiseshell box

that you kept locked
in the top drawer
of the dresser

five of them
wrapped
in muslin

all from the same man

was this him mother?
my father?
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Re: personal effects

Post by creativesoul » February 13th, 2013, 1:14 pm

nice- love feeling curious after i read- sweet mysteries
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Re: personal effects

Post by justwalt » February 14th, 2013, 2:59 am

was this him mother? my father?
my memory too
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Re: personal effects

Post by dadio » February 14th, 2013, 4:07 am

Excellent poem, David.
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