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revolutionrabbit
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Post by revolutionrabbit » February 14th, 2013, 4:08 am

in the coke bottles of coincidence
the mica rain rolls across the spice rain
genuflecting geodes appear in the halo sphere
nothing is as it seems it seems nothing is as it
we have been down this roman road before
we have sacked zombie Disneyland

in her night eyes the universe points inward
we drove the drive-in movie theaters of mars
down obsolete highways of the silent pictures
the butterfly flowers blow up the horizon

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Re: sack mouse

Post by judih » February 14th, 2013, 12:51 pm

the coke bottles of coincidence


what a great line. saying it sets the mind up for the rest of the poem

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Post by stilltrucking » February 14th, 2013, 1:43 pm

your poem made my head feel better

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Re: sack mouse

Post by revolutionrabbit » February 15th, 2013, 2:49 am

set up minds
and no head ache
what more can we
ask for poem

free smile

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