talk to me

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saw
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talk to me

Post by saw » February 16th, 2013, 9:12 am

just language....
of course not
not merely grammatical rules
not only the pomp and circumstance
of vocabulary, rather
an EXPLOSION, the human spirit
spewed by a healthy cough,
particles of humanity blown
into the consciousness, into
the vegetation,
very old growth trees
stand long and tall and smiling
a watershed of imagination reflects
a complete ecosystem
with many spiritual roads
yet to travel, caught up
in the spokes.....
of the spinning wheel
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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stilltrucking
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Re: talk to me

Post by stilltrucking » February 16th, 2013, 1:51 pm

a healthy cough
a lucky strike
a good poem
8)

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dadio
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Re: talk to me

Post by dadio » February 16th, 2013, 4:15 pm

a complete ecosystem
with many spiritual roads
yet to travel...

Splendid 8) poem

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justwalt
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