that summer

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saw
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that summer

Post by saw » February 17th, 2013, 4:01 pm

I touched you
repeatedly
during that wet hot season
that followed my spring of discontent

the window fan whirred
a spinning voyeur
that rumbled into daylight
and we did it again

and it felt natural
same as breathing
and breath
can be so exciting

especially when you think
of the alternative
the anti-breath
those other days of nothing

not a hint of the fire
that stretched it's limbs high and hot
that same fire....
that melted the links of chain
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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stilltrucking
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Re: that summer

Post by stilltrucking » February 17th, 2013, 11:17 pm

thanks for reminding me of how love was for me in 1972 8) :D :cry:
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Re: that summer

Post by creativesoul » February 17th, 2013, 11:25 pm

THIS MADE ME HOT- IN A COUPLE WAYS- LIKED IT.. 8)
SPEAKS OF THE PASSION THAT CAN BE SUCH A PASSAGEWAY TO ANOTER WORLD-PEACE= POWER OF LOVE!!!!
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Re: that summer

Post by justwalt » February 18th, 2013, 5:59 pm

breathing says it all
many is a word
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dadio
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Re: that summer

Post by dadio » February 19th, 2013, 11:06 am

Interesting capture and enjoyed.
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constantine
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Re: that summer

Post by constantine » February 19th, 2013, 11:28 am

ahh, the wet hot season - i remember it well. i got my chains martinized.
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joanne goshen
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Re: that summer

Post by joanne goshen » February 19th, 2013, 11:37 am

whoa,missed this one,really good
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