a life toward

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sweetwater
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a life toward

Post by sweetwater » May 24th, 2013, 5:34 pm

the rest of the poems
still unwritten

moments yet to be remembered
as the unlived portions of life
in retrospect

to live the future retrospectively

where the end begins when
the beginning ends

as if to meet in the middle
of opposing movements

toward the within

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Re: a life toward

Post by justwalt » May 24th, 2013, 9:27 pm

(see; "talkin' to myself")

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Re: a life toward

Post by goldenmyst » May 25th, 2013, 11:06 pm

Fascinating. Enjoyed the underlying form of this much. A real mind pleaser.

John

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