blood on rock

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mnaz
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blood on rock

Post by mnaz » June 2nd, 2013, 9:25 pm

we got more range
we got more rage and technology
we could send these missiles farther
but only if necessary, in the name

we got more money than them
we could conquer this goddamned rock
with our goddamned gold and god
until the war starts over again

you will meet yourself out there
on a slope, bleeding and not sure why
in all this warring, these bible verses
under a cruel, perfect sunrise.

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Re: blood on rock

Post by judih » June 2nd, 2013, 10:49 pm

it ain't over till the birds stop singing

may today's sunrise be benevolent

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Re: blood on rock

Post by dadio » June 7th, 2013, 2:28 am

Darn good poem.

you will meet yourself out there
on a slope, bleeding and not sure why
in all this warring, these bible verses
under a cruel, perfect sunrise.

Fine lines.

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Re: blood on rock

Post by david » June 7th, 2013, 3:52 pm

Good that, especially the verse Tell picked out....seeya..D

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Re: blood on rock

Post by mnaz » June 8th, 2013, 2:54 pm

thanks ...
like dino said, beat our warmongers into plowshares ....

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Re: blood on rock

Post by sweetwater » June 14th, 2013, 4:11 pm

great poem

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