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Arcadia
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patrio-tic

Post by Arcadia » July 9th, 2013, 9:20 pm

Aires de independencia
aletean en nuestra comida patriótica del día.
(Parece que nuestros hombres fueron inspirados por el invierno
para hacer declaraciones, revoluciones y también para morirse…).
Más allá de posibles tácticas, estrategias, la Historia y la fatalidad
los días para el descanso, el juego, los discursos,
las discusiones interminables y la digestión difícil
siguen siendo bienvenidos cada año.



Independence times
flap their wings
through our patriotic meal of the day.
(It seems our men were inspired by southern winter
for doing declarations & revolutions & also dying).
Beyond possible strategies & tactics & History & glory & fatality
days for resting, playing, speeches,
neverending discussions & hard digestion
keep been welcomed each year.

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Re: patrio-tic

Post by the mingo » July 9th, 2013, 11:50 pm

(It seems our men were inspired by southern winter
for doing declarations & revolutions & also dying).
gotta just love it - lay it out there Veronica - you go girl!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: patrio-tic

Post by Arcadia » July 10th, 2013, 9:43 am

just dealing with festive locro & empanadas & ....! :lol: (it´s a kind of poema "bajativo" as the chileans like to say!) :wink:

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Re: patrio-tic

Post by dadio » July 12th, 2013, 2:21 am

Love of country can cost dearly. Fine poem.

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