off your rocker

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sweetwater
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off your rocker

Post by sweetwater » July 11th, 2013, 9:29 am

in the busyness of life
as age requires
in the memory of chairs
and relaxation

being off one's rocker
extends the graciousness
of metaphors to include

words that rock back and forth
to say or speak

in the virtues of hearing oneself
as an auditory check

to verify if the ears are still working

where in times of simple pleasures
great ideas are born of being off of one's rocker

and more reknowned gestures and places
as being on the throne

to surmise and dictate the colour of reason
and good poetry

or journal articles
and the post modern interpretation

and greatly to include in the construct of ideas
what relates one's cup of morning

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Arcadia
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Re: off your rocker

Post by Arcadia » July 11th, 2013, 9:59 am

one´s cup of morning :)

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Re: off your rocker

Post by dadio » July 11th, 2013, 1:12 pm

In more ways than one. Classic.

in the memory of chairs
and relaxation

being off one's rocker
extends the graciousness
of metaphors to include

words that rock back and forth
to say or speak...

sweetwater
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Re: off your rocker

Post by sweetwater » July 11th, 2013, 7:02 pm

the rocking chair is where i usually spend
some of my time

and have been known to have a thought or two
in the construct of my morning

thanks for your commas

i mean comments

,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, i, think, the, comma, is, very, understandably, understated
and over valued, full stop !!

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