after the going of summer

Post by **mindbum** » December 22nd, 2004, 10:38 pm

mostly i wondered about the word 'peace'
and whether it was a little play
or possibly a misspelling.

Post by **jimboloco** » December 22nd, 2004, 11:17 pm

it's the attituide. is "moi" a kiss or a "moishe"??
are you in the tent when the rocket comes crashing"
do you see the weathering of dumbya's face?
are you with the insurgent masses when they aks you to
teach me about shelly
but don't parade around with a fully belly. man,
cause santa claus got a sleigh, man,
an his reindeers are high on angel dust, man,
an they flying around the world.
no he ain't a band.he's the dude, abiding, post traumatic scrooge
imbibing.
empty pockets before begging.

heyu zeus\
the best minds of their generation\now what?

i saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by madness, starving hysterical naked,
dragging themselves thru the negro streets at dawn looking for an angry fix

is there a creative parallel to this?

Post by **stilltrucking** » December 22nd, 2004, 11:35 pm

Post by **stilltrucking** » December 22nd, 2004, 11:37 pm

you keep editing yours and me mine and see if we meet in the middle

Post by **jimboloco** » December 22nd, 2004, 11:41 pm

that first poem has some dowsing truths in there.
pointing towards water. a deepening of perception
a zen koan, for sure.

Post by **stilltrucking** » December 22nd, 2004, 11:49 pm

Post by **Doreen Peri** » December 23rd, 2004, 12:26 am

mindbum wrote:mostly i wondered about the word 'peace'
and whether it was a little play
or possibly a misspelling.

It was an intentional pun, mindbum... a cheat, er cheap way to get across a double-meaning.

Hey, this is like really cool! I posted a poem and there are 2 pages of replies! LOL!

I thought for a moment I was becoming a popular poet! hahahaha...

well, carry on, you all... thanks for reading if you did

and here's some haiku for ya if you'd like to argue about the content of craft or lack of either

http://www.studioeight.tv/writers/doree ... mpses.html

Post by **jimboloco** » December 23rd, 2004, 8:34 am

down and out
santa cruz sidewalks
old man with bowler hat and musical saw

gave him a free ride in my taxi.
he gave me a little book
wobblies manifesto

bowler hat tipped
smiling hello goodbye
into pacific hotel

Post by **jimboloco** » December 23rd, 2004, 9:36 am

oh the peace of the yellow moon
a peace of my heart
peacemeal
peace

Post by **dadio** » August 16th, 2013, 11:05 pm

Yes, one of my favourtite poems of yours Doreen.

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