go

[sweetwater]

you
her shining knight.

knight shining her

sight of the slope
and down the square

you watched the rain
from the balony on the stairs

[dadio]

Now this is good. Sensible use of one arrangement of words of a poem to make another.

[sweetwater]

there is some sabotage going on

which i have tried to address

people love to start fights and create problems
and not solutions

i enjoy reading your work

[dadio]

You have a keen mind, an intellectial touch in your work.