oops october ku

Clarity.
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Kabul
vortex of confusion
a chance escape
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In r assets
Grip on passing wind
Right......kapoof!
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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whirlwind of freedom
spins to a halt
time-clock crunch
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the dry fallen leaves
blown across pavements
make many scratching sounds
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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out of fallen dreams
energetic fireworks
stand clear
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derangement of the senses
spittle at the mouth
let me mark the sands
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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dear overlord
you don't exist
stop pretending
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i woke up into
a wind that was taking
all the leaves off the trees
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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fresh aloe vera
to soothe my pain
do not disturb
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dear super ego
I pretend
I am not guilty

an und für sich
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a chunk of sleep
conquers my whole bed
till three a.m.
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well I ...
yes but ... aw the hell with it
i'm going to bed
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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dove into sleep
surfaced into the dawn
going to ride on sunshine
I used to be smart

Free Rice
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in a story
all makes no sense
till the end
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:!: double Wow & Bam :!: - Thx judih 8) 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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