jackson's mist dispelled

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jackson's mist dispelled

Post by mtmynd » October 31st, 2013, 2:02 am

free french the golden thoughts
and lie down with the essence
that is dispelled from the orifice
of the liberating highway for
tunnel vision is unbecoming to you.

let the words drip from your self
and see the patterns displaced
before your opened eyes, with rhyme,
without reason, without conditions
placed upon you, for you, by you.

dispel the guardians of the ego
into the bondage of ether placenta
and succumb to the numbness
of freedoms dancing light,
pregnant with lavenders sucking bees.

forbid not the tassels to twirl
long past your graven image, but
kneel gently upon the asphalt of boredom,
while imagination rips into a sonata
in 'see sharp'... no flats on this trip!


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Re: jackson's mist dispelled

Post by the mingo » October 31st, 2013, 12:18 pm

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: jackson's mist dispelled

Post by zero_hero » October 31st, 2013, 12:30 pm

nice work!!!

mindless ramble follows :|

beyond ego
beyond parents
life is mystery
Free Rice

"the lesson is... if you want it? keep a copy of it." Doreen Peri

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Re: jackson's mist dispelled

Post by mtmynd » October 31st, 2013, 4:54 pm

zero_hero wrote:nice work!!!
Thank you kindly, JT.
zero_hero wrote:mindless ramble follows :|

beyond ego
beyond parents
life is mystery
life is too short
to waste on words
that avoid truth

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Re: jackson's mist dispelled

Post by Unk » November 1st, 2013, 9:45 pm

lives are wasted
for the truth
everyday :|
thanks dino

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Re: jackson's mist dispelled

Post by mtmynd » November 3rd, 2013, 1:56 am

Unk wrote:lives are wasted
for the truth
everyday :|
truth that is wasted
may prove to be an
untruth until time
polishes it into a
gleaming light
which illumines
the shadows until
no thing but truth
remains for all to see
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Re: jackson's mist dispelled

Post by tarbaby » November 3rd, 2013, 1:08 pm

I liked the poem a lot Cecil but, {for some reason I am not quite aware of yet}, the truth is something that I associate with Dick Cheney and Adolph Hitler. Just call me Crazy Jack. Nietzsche died for my sins. :(
“Where is that man who has forgotten words that I may have a word with him?”

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Post by mtmynd » November 3rd, 2013, 3:49 pm

tarbaby wrote:I liked the poem a lot Cecil but, {for some reason I am not quite aware of yet}, the truth is something that I associate with Dick Cheney and Adolph Hitler.
that is odd, JT, unless you are referring to the fact that "truth" has reached an all time low since their personal actions were a fact in itself... but far from Truth as one can be...?

Time for me to go fix a couple of turkey dogs for lunch... care for one? ;)
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Post by stilltrucking » November 3rd, 2013, 4:00 pm

If it sounds odd to you it is probably me 8)
I am an odd fellow.
I been thinking about joining the Independent Order of Odd Fellows :wink:

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Re: jackson's mist dispelled

Post by mtmynd » November 3rd, 2013, 4:54 pm

methinks you do more thinking than doing. am i right? not that there is anything wrong with thinking... i am guilty as every thinker is and maybe more so.
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Re: jackson's mist dispelled

Post by stilltrucking » November 3rd, 2013, 6:28 pm

sometimes i feel like jack kerouac, if typing is doing, typing and thinking doin the old keyboard jitterbug.

save a turkey leg for me.

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