Evening

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theirishsea
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Evening

Post by theirishsea » November 3rd, 2013, 11:05 am

the river flummoxes
the moon tears out its heart
bleeds reflected light
the dangles of dreams sparkle
in Guinevere's hair
so red that blood must hide blue
oh how it is the sweet clanging
of shadow
and the river seeping fingers
into the land of winds
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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Re: Evening

Post by mtmynd » November 4th, 2013, 1:24 am

theirishsea wrote: ... the sweet clanging of shadow
and the river seeping fingers
into the land of winds
an interestingly mystical ending to a worthy piece...
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the mingo
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Re: Evening

Post by the mingo » November 4th, 2013, 7:48 pm

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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dadio
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Re: Evening

Post by dadio » November 5th, 2013, 3:48 am

Ah, bet Tennyson never quite saw it this way. Fine work. 8)

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Re: Evening

Post by saw » November 5th, 2013, 10:10 am

economy and beauty....especially fond of

"so red that blood must hide blue"
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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