choice of destiny laid bare like threads

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mtmynd
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choice of destiny laid bare like threads

Post by mtmynd » November 19th, 2013, 1:12 pm

choice of destiny laid bare
...like threads


tremelo
staccato
infinito
deconstructo
the nameless
being renamed
the brute
savaged again
perniciously
we grasp
the light
no thing
to hold
_._._._

we are but
star dust
magnified
into egos
prancing
upon stages
built as edifices
to our own
sanctimony

we breathe deep
and kneel down
to kiss our ass

that which we
have created
succumbs unto
a bridge across
the fear of alone

reaching out
branching skyward
as if hell ran deep
and heaven was a
castle built on clouds

the nervous system
pulsating in rhythm
we remain parched
under suns of corpulence
whose destiny shall
remain hidden by our
corpses lying naked
from disbelief of that
which sings lullabies
echoing in the caverns
of our inner sanctorums

banquet
bank quit
shank it


humility rolls
over edges scrolled
by deft particles
quasars reproach
and joy bounces
aimlessly on cotton
sheets of percale
the womb ignites
its force and antilles
sweeps the mind clean

showers formed of tears
drowning dreams of completeness
mascara running down to fetish'd feet

the crows mimic destiny
while i stay six feet above
rotating in breezes of despair
that swoon the pain into happiness
the broken jugs of whine
spill once again contents ajar

pi fright - intelleX
morgana stripped bare
jehovah mixed
negativity nixed
project undone

words
just
words
from
head
to mouth

--{beggars!}--

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Re: choice of destiny laid bare like threads

Post by the mingo » November 19th, 2013, 2:19 pm

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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dadio
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Re: choice of destiny laid bare like threads

Post by dadio » November 20th, 2013, 4:39 am

Excellently scribed.

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Re: choice of destiny laid bare like threads

Post by saw » November 20th, 2013, 10:19 am

ambitiously creative......maybe i need to drink a few of those
jugs of whine, before they get broken...also like the structure and shape of the poem
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

mtmynd
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Re: choice of destiny laid bare like threads

Post by mtmynd » November 20th, 2013, 2:13 pm

Thank you, dadio... 'tis appreciated.
saw wrote:ambitiously creative......maybe i need to drink a few of those
jugs of whine, before they get broken...also like the structure and shape of the poem
Thx, saw. i enjoy placement of the words of my pieces as a visual accoutrement to the poem itself, making the most of the spatial stage, so to speak, for the reader to indulge upon.
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