Dreaming

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Shem
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Dreaming

Post by Shem » November 21st, 2013, 3:33 pm

Wandering through the invisible web of
emptiness and illusion.
I’m just here shooting my sad arrows at a hopeless moon,
Looking for some kind of reply from the empty
blue vault above.
But all my bolts destined to fall far short
of any connection, drop about me.
Returning, again and again from unknowable regions
to lodge in this cold earth.
Leave the letter that never begins to go find the latter that ever comes to end, written in smoke and blurred by mist and signed of solitude, sealed of night.
-James Joyce

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dadio
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Re: Dreaming

Post by dadio » November 22nd, 2013, 4:12 am

A nihilistic poem, I can well imagine Dostoevsky or Albert Camus, writing in this genre. It has class though, and engages. V.good 8)

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Re: Dreaming

Post by saw » November 22nd, 2013, 10:24 am

somehow you've made grim, poetic.....sometimes we run 'round and 'round in the same rut...
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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