walkin in the tall corn

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saw
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walkin in the tall corn

Post by saw » December 16th, 2013, 7:39 am

we walked in the tall corn
flapping waves of grain tickling my ears
majestic like those lingering images at three a m
in the old days when TV actually used to go off the air

and i would surely would have been lost
if it were not for granddaddy's knowing footprints
to place my tiny boots inside as he told me story after story
as he sang to me Mississippi John Hurt songs

as we slipped in and out of the greenish brown stalks
Blue Harvest Blues, Oh Mary Don't You Weep,
Cow Hooking Blues, he sang like he talked
a blue streak soft and raspy flying over the fields

like the black magpies in July, and i told him i was afraid
'cause i couldn't see where I was going, so he picked me up
by my little overall straps, cradled me in his tanned farmer arms
that looked like tree trunks with mounds of wired hair

but he never stopped walkin' and talkin', whisperin' at times,
" When fear gets to playin' with yer mind boy, just remember
fear is nuthin but a dream, LOVE is the real thing, and love'l
make a big ole mountain lion turn tail, run back inside his grotto

Hell son, a bad man would sooner wrassle with a pack of mangy coyotes
than mess with a man with love in his heart
you'll be alright boy, keep the truth on your tongue
and a song in your heart, and you will never have any trouble finding your way."
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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the mingo
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Re: walkin in the tall corn

Post by the mingo » December 16th, 2013, 2:08 pm

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: walkin in the tall corn

Post by mtmynd » December 17th, 2013, 1:53 am

your granddaddy was a true realist... one hell of a man.

gracias, SAW... fine piece.
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dadio
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Re: walkin in the tall corn

Post by dadio » December 17th, 2013, 3:42 am

Excellent tale. 8)

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