re unto a woman

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sonofthesun
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re unto a woman

Post by sonofthesun » January 31st, 2014, 3:32 am

I wrote andposted this may 1, 2010. Have gone and edited, hopefully for the better. May retitle it extended family.
This one needs more work.

We do these things without a guide
We are the harbingers of humanity
the future is our present
our life upon the edge
of this eternal golden dawn
a family of vagabonds
united in love
united in hope
to transcend
the dreams becomes reality
reality gives way to the dream
There is no empty space

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Re: re unto a woman

Post by creativesoul » January 31st, 2014, 8:41 pm

beautiful
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: re unto a woman

Post by dadio » February 4th, 2014, 2:33 am

Thank you for sharing this fine poem.

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