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creativesoul
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too complicated

Post by creativesoul » February 6th, 2014, 10:40 pm

i just sort of got the message
that salt water and heat
might do the trick
love of family= had a few
all around
holding me up- walking me thru
building new tissue
the bullet holes didnt hurt much
it was what caused it
that stung
hawaii says' forget it'
ok i can do that
swim with me
feel the deepest things
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Re: too complicated

Post by dadio » February 7th, 2014, 5:49 am

Good tale told in your unique tongue 8)
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