THIS GRIEF MY SON.
THIS GRIEF MY SON.
This grief
has teeth
my son
it bites through
skin and bone
tearing at heart
and mind
(the deeper
the love
the harder
the pain
I find)
this grief
with its pearly whites
gnaws at me
through dull days
and dark nights
trying to drag me
to dark depths
shaking me
like a dog with bone
bringing me
to deep hurts
and aching moan
this grief
holds hard
bites deep
taking me
to dark dawns
and black dogs
of sunset red
and echoing memories
in numb
and hurting head
this grief has teeth
my son
biting through
bone and skin
tearing me within
but memories remain
strong and clear
and bright
which will
sustain me
through many
a deep dark night.
has teeth
my son
it bites through
skin and bone
tearing at heart
and mind
(the deeper
the love
the harder
the pain
I find)
this grief
with its pearly whites
gnaws at me
through dull days
and dark nights
trying to drag me
to dark depths
shaking me
like a dog with bone
bringing me
to deep hurts
and aching moan
this grief
holds hard
bites deep
taking me
to dark dawns
and black dogs
of sunset red
and echoing memories
in numb
and hurting head
this grief has teeth
my son
biting through
bone and skin
tearing me within
but memories remain
strong and clear
and bright
which will
sustain me
through many
a deep dark night.
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Re: THIS GRIEF MY SON.
i feel ya- nice write-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Thank you, creative soul
Re: THIS GRIEF MY SON.
Dadio- Very moving poem to your son.
regards,
ed
regards,
ed
Re: THIS GRIEF MY SON.
grief in one way or another is forever...we learn to cope at best....it's also a necessary process
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
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The teeth...they cut to the quick. I enjoyed this. Thank you
There is no empty space
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Thank you, sonofthesun
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Very touching and heart wrenching. My heart goes out to you. I'm so very sorry for your loss.
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one of the things about loss that is so horrible is the thoughts 'no one understands how i feel- and that lonliness and even anger that this has to be a portion of acceptance-- i hope that the hole that you feel in your heart is filled with golden light and healing- and that you allow the person you love to touch you there- even though it seems like they are not here- anymore- i know that just by calling out to them with my heart- that they feel me- and i feel them-
letting go is so sad sometimes- because maybe we do not want to- at all- and sometimes that is even selfish- my granny was 92 and i didnt want her to go- but she hadda go-
i am sure that you are filled with love like mariposa butterflies in the sun- just let the flapping wings and butterfly dust carry you to the next level- my throat is all big now like a frog- because emot
ions are like that- peace
letting go is so sad sometimes- because maybe we do not want to- at all- and sometimes that is even selfish- my granny was 92 and i didnt want her to go- but she hadda go-
i am sure that you are filled with love like mariposa butterflies in the sun- just let the flapping wings and butterfly dust carry you to the next level- my throat is all big now like a frog- because emot

reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Thank you, Dorren & creativesoul
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