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saw
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random journey

Post by saw » March 6th, 2014, 5:10 pm

like a Dionysian weaver of ego
you march in immortal chaos,
your pickled irises have lost their brilliance
and that once fierce courage that turned so many gears

has rusted..... that orchestration
that insisted they mesh, is running through town
like the village idiot,
no Orphic trumpets announce your coming

the constellations are worried and tired
the galaxies are disappointed in your decisions
the planets cry for what could have been
and you can only marvel in the beauty of your perfect brain
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: random journey

Post by judih » March 7th, 2014, 12:09 am

excellent piece
how i love the
'like the village idiot,
no Orphic trumpets announce your coming'

alas, not everyone gets Orphic trumpets

saw
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Re: random journey

Post by saw » March 8th, 2014, 12:43 pm

thanx a lot judih...glad it struck a chord
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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